10/12- Adjustments

This week has been all about adjustments to the rough cut we turned in last week. We received a lot of great feedback from the class concerning us possibly including ken burns effected newspaper articles, and our choice to use a certain sound bridge between the applauding students and the dead dolphin; this served as a fantastic learning example, showing us explicitly the power of editing. However, a lot of our comments were concerned with the need for condensing the story. Though the good news was that we did, in fact, have a story. All in all the class seemed to respond well to the cut that Matt prepared.